Roast my landing page
So, IH, please welcome FlockIn. Some of you are my target audience :-)
Long time listener first-time caller here. I've been building this landing page for a couple of weeks now, after cooking the idea and tech stack for some time before. Now I need to see where it's going.
Please, head out to https://www.flockin.co and roast as much as you can. Now, I'm not a designer, so if you explaining something design-specific, I'll be roasting back for more info. I would really like to know:
a) do you understand what it is and/or what is it for
b) is it clear enough
c) is everything working along
d) how interested/intrigued are you ;-)
Thanks a lot!
Yes, because I already know other communities similar to this one.
Not sure what do you mean?
I like this idea. Already browsing wip.chat and getmakerlog.com from time to time.
It might be a bit more difficult to commit to be a regular member. That's why the openness of the sites above work better than closing the site behind a login.
My 2 cents :)
@alourie I really like your overall design.
Except one thing, the email subscription bar doesn't look like an input field, make it shorter?
I'm also improving my site, keen to listen to your advice too!
Show, don't tell. You are telling too much things and not showing anyhting.
@iozozturk would you mind elaborating? There's nothing to "show" yet really, that page is basically gathering interest before spending too much time or money into a thing no one wants.
Thanks!
I would like to see visuals showing what you are promising in this page. I really needed to read all of the paragraphs to understand what you offer. I would like to see a leaner page really.
Hm, interesting. So how would I go about it if it doesn't really exist?
Actually, come to think of it, is the issue in the fact that there's just text all over? Would splitting the text into a separate page help to navigate it?
After all, it doesn't really exist, so I can't show anything, but if there were just much less text to read? Would it help?
You have some visuals on the page but they don't tell the story nor support enough. Perhaps you can give a tip about your value by using visuals as "from->to" style. So that I can understand if I signup what I will get in return when you launch.
Too much text indeed, you can hide some of them in an extendable sections perhaps, so no need to jump to another screen. Just look at some of other successful Landing pages to get inspired.
Do you have a list of successful LPs handy? Preferably something that's used to collect emails, not a registration for the website...
Thanks!
https://www.lapa.ninja/
That's a lot of text!
In this message or the landing page? Is it a good thing or a bad thing? Is the "lot of text" gets in the way or not?
I have more questions :-)
We will breakdown your page, during our next live stream!
now that's scary! When's the stream?
Thanks!
https://forms.gle/49VWcX7LkH2zoTKf8
Registered! Much appreciate it!
I think this is a great page alourie!
I love it.
Thanks, Pascal! Appreciate it.