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Roast my landing page. Make it crispy!

I've been working on this landing page that I want to use to validate a product idea. Wanted to get some feedback on it before testing it out with potential customers. Mostly looking to know if what the product itself is and what the benefits are comes across clearly (I realize the design is pretty garbage I've never built a landing page before).

Any help is greatly appreciated in advance, please give it your best roast (no feelings will be hurt)!

Link: https://findmypaths.com/

on April 29, 2021
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    From a design perspective, I'd make the chat box smaller. So that it sits inside a container, and doesn't push all the way to the edges of the screen.

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      That's a good point, I'll be sure to update that in the next version, thanks!

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    I like that you state exactly what you do from the beginning. I agree with other comments the box could be smaller. Look at copy.ai for inspiration.

    Other than that it'd say you need a lot more information before posting here. Start building out more then come back.

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      Thanks for the feedback, could you clarify what you mean by a lot more information? Are you referring to having more copy on the page describing the service being provided?

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    I think you need to define who you are selling this to. While the TAM could be every professional, finding 1 subset and building from there will help you to learn and iterate.

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      Thanks for the insight, I'll look to narrow the focus to a smaller subset of potential users on the next iteration.