Roast my Pitch Deck

Hey hacker,

So, it hit me that growing my business is going to be quite the adventure without some external funding. After about two weeks of grinding away, I've put together this pitch. Before I hit up those investors, I'd really appreciate your thoughts and feedback on it.
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1xR7x9bB_Hd-W7JfHiJbftLcddnjSeV4r6CrcrPNTV_Y/edit?usp=sharing

Cheers