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Roast my Product Post

https://medium.com/@mobilemarket/solving-office-clinic-waiting-f67a466defd1

Hi Everyone. Please roast my product post -- how would you improve this post? Thanks.

submitted this linkon December 5, 2022
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    Hey,

    The biggest thing I would say is that Medium is probably not the best location for this post. I guess your target audience is office managers so I would say LinkedIn and Twitter are better options.

    I know you said roast your article but I think the biggest issue you're going to have with this is that you're running a freemium business model. I wrote an article about the problem with this not too long ago and how to avoid it - https://www.indiehackers.com/post/the-belief-freemium-strategy-that-took-this-sideproject-from-0-8-million-a-year-3b465df4c0

    Hope that helps

    Best

    Chris

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      Hey Chris @TheBLUNTMethod
      So I was thinking about giving the BLUNT method a try. How does this look?

      https://medium.com/@mobilemarket/how-a-prime-clinic-provides-better-patient-care-2644a05f182

      Let me know what you think, when you get the time.

      Thank you.

      Regards,

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        Hey,

        Sorry I didn't see your post the other day.

        Apologies I can't really freely provide individual feedback - its not really fair for my customers who pay me for my feedback.

        My apologies.

        Best

        Chris

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      Hey Chris,
      Thanks so much for this reply. How would you do the BLUNT method for this? ;)

      Regards,