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Roast my SaaS landing page 🔥

by Hanzlaijaz123
https://scrollsequence.com/

Hello,

I would appreciate some feedback on my new SaaS website. Please don't hesitate to roast!
Looking forward to it!

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submitted this linkon May 25, 2023
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    Hey there! Nice work overall. A few suggestions, coming from a copywriter:

    • I would be careful with the font color. The headline "Cinematic Scroll Animation" looks a little strange with the orange. Maybe it's too thin? It gets lost right when I get to the landing page
    • I love the transition into the next section titled "Image Sequence Animation WordPress Plugin". The sub paragraph below it could be a little broken up. It reads a little clustered.
    • Make sure to line up the descriptions for each sub category. It is not lined up
    • I would try some different CTAs besides "BUY NOW". The buy now is overused in landing pages and could be a bit more personal or emotional like "ARE YOU READY?"
    • I don't feel like the "screenshots" section is needed...it doesn't look very good to the user eye
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