Roast my (version 2.0 landing page!)
Last time I posted my SaaS platform, very few people understood the concept behind it. I have changed a lot and added smarter headlines with (How It Works) etc.
Please visit the link below and give me your honest (unfiltered feedback).
https://www.schemaboost.com
Cheers
Seeing it for the first time. Makes sense to me!
"Increase CTR. ..and profits." Could be said about Google Ads, adding videos to your site, or gamification.
"Complete solution..." is an empty phrase.
Your better, most compelling copy is at the very bottom.
"Let your search results stand out." THAT'S what your product does. And the copy below it solves a problem. Try to concisely summarize it. Something like "Do in an hour what entire teams do in months...thousands of website pages."
Add a before/after photo (instead of a long video no one is going to watch) to that copy and a visitor will know what your product does without even having to scroll down further.
Just so you know, I have removed the video completely and switched it with single illustrative image. And moved the title to top as you suggested. Great feedback! thanks again.
Hey thanks for your straightforward answers. You are absolutely correct about the video. For some reason I assumed people would want to know how this works (but it seems we have to keep this video in a later stage). I wasn't convinced about the "complete solution" but many people think that my "solution" is only an editor. I have to be more creative on delivering the idea, and I was thinking about removing the video and adding before/after (and now after your feedback, I know its 100% correct decision).
Glad I could help. Good luck to you!