Roast our landing page
Hi creatives/builders/hackers,
We're building an alternative for Heroku on AWS, named Utopiops, and we'll launch it in a few days. However, we're not sure if our landing page delivers the message clear enough and is designed well.
Please take a look at our landing page and share your valuable feedbacks with me, I can do the same for you in return.
Any feedbacks are absolutely welcome and I'll share all of them with the team.
About the embedded YouTube video, the sound quality is bad on some part when you talk (for example at 10s).
I personally use AI voices for the video on my website.
No more recording problems with this solution. :)
Thanks for your feedback. Any service you'd recommend, specially if they have free plan or one that's not pricy?
My website Rollideo can allow you to create videos with auto-generated voice-overs & the exact subtitles.
In the current version, you can make a video from pictures, in the next version you will have the possibility to concatenate videos.
You can subscribe to the Rollideo email list to stay informed.
If you want to edit yourself your videos (instead of using an automatic generation tool), the 2 biggest services for AI voices are AWS polly and Google Cloud Text-To-Speech.
The price is low to create AI voices.
Interesting, specially if the voice is a bit more natural.
Thanks for suggestions.
Some possible improvements
Trust Boosters
Any form of trust boosting before the second CTA would help here, this could be
Another more specific change, instead of pushing them to action e.g "Get Started" push them to value instead, "Get Started" -> "Deploy your Application Now" (This might not be the best wording but you get the idea) Illustrated here
"Utopiops is the best way to build and ship your product, relieving you of dealing with complexities of the underlying platform."
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"With Utopiops, you don't have to be an infrastructure pro to deploy a stable product", Sounds like less jargon, just my opinion, that still needs some work but could serve as inspiration.
Also I don't like the generic stock image at the top, nobody gets turned on by that. Maybe replace it with a screenshot of your product.
"DO NOT use Utopiops if you enjoy wasting time and money on the things that don't matter to your business." -> This whole line is horse shit, not sure why it's even there. This is like a generic sentence that doesn't accomplish anything. If I was selling a health app would I really put "DO NOT use myhealthapp if you enjoy being fat", it just sounds ridiculous and childish.
General Framework you should follow
Just my 2 cents
Love your feedback. Notes taken.