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SaaS proposition feedback required

https://www.revinsoft.com/TeStack?ref=ih

Hi everyone,
Please have a look at the 3rd iteration of the landing page for my SaaS proposal and let me know about how comprehensive the service details are, if something is not detailed enough or if you have another suggestion.

Any kind of feedback is more than welcome!

Thanks

on October 22, 2019
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    Hi Ilias,

    I agree with @Deweysi's comment re making it more benefit focussed.

    Looking at the landing page, I couldn't straight away think of why I would need to use it.

    Feature based is something like "grow revenue by testing checkout flows". A list of features is something like "a/b test checkout flows". You need to give people a reason to use your app.

    I would probably focus on 1 very specific use case and focus the message around that.

    Good luck and keep iterating!

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    I’d say the design, particularly the logo is really letting you down aFair bit. I think it may be worth making your copy a bit more benefit focused rather than just a list of features. It feels a bit too wordy in a few spots so may be a case where less is more.

    Hope that helps, best of luck!

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    The design isn't good for an "Optimization Platform" I would expect much better.

    After the redesign tag me and I will comment on the content :)

    I also built https://saaspages.xyz/ where you can get some inspiration from.