Hey, all. We launched our new product a few days ago and are iterating on the landing page. Any thoughts on the current version?
https://www.summit.work
Thanks :)
Thanks to everyone who gave me feedback. We've pushed some updates and will continue to iterate!
At risk of missing the forest for the trees...
A small tweak that could help a lot: consider making the page much narrower on desktop. Right now, it feels like you're struggling to use up all the horizontal space. If you made everything narrower (
margin: 0 auto; max-width: 800pxor something like that) and maybe reduced your font size, things might feel a bit tighter.Another good point. We'll try that today as well.
Hey,
Must say it looks fresh and appealing color-wise.
Some notes;
We definitely agree with you on not having enough features to justify $3. We're releasing some more stuff this week, hopefully that will get people more interested.
I think you could improve your copy (if you look at my post history, you'll see I say this quite a lot. We're all guilty of it).
"Tools for less interrupted work" doesn't really tell me much (and also it sounds like a non-native English speaker wrote it).
"Record status updates in Slack without interrupting flow and losing time." gives me a little bit more to go on - now I know that it's integrating something with Slack. Problem is:
a) I don't know what "status updates" are;
b) "interrupting flow and losing time." is very generic and occupies visual space (as well as the reader's mental energy) without really conveying any information.
"Manage tasks, objectives, and key results in one place." does a much better job (as does the Slack screenshot). Now I'm thinking team members use your app to post their work tasks/progress/results, and the app then routes those into Slack.
How about you make the hero:
Mobile image - Slack screenshot -
"An app to collect team updates on their objectives, progress and results"
"Collate in a single Slack channel for easier management".
Thanks for the detailed feedback. I think your point that the better explanations are closer to the bottom of the page is true. We'll be make improvements today.
Just two things to say:
At least on mobile, the first photo of the phone is cut off at the bottom, and it looks weird. I feel like if there was a border to it I could get it, but it looks like it was just poorly cropped. Maybe just include the photo of the full phone?
The copy feels a little off to me. Maybe I'm not the target customer, but I don't truly understand what the product actually does. If you went into how the product works I'd understand why I would want to purchase it.
Overall, I do like the vibe of the website. Good luck!
Great feedback. It seems like we need to do a better job of explaining the value quickly. We'll be working on that today :)
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