Tell me if this stands on its own two feet
So this is an article/landing page hybrid. I don't think you've gotta read through all of it — as a listicle, I'm confident in it! We worked hard on the book choices and the copy.
But we're testing a new audience segment, so it also needs to function well as a landing: enough intrigue to drive sign-ups, enough context to belay confusion. Because the rest of the site is not geared toward nor code-switched for creatives lol.
Do you think it delivers on that front? Is there anything big you're left wondering?
Somehow the first time that I viewed the page I mistakenly thought that it was a listicle without the list - I didn't realize that the 7 books shown lower down on the page were the ones in 'the collection', rather the CTA button to get the collection made me feel like that was the end of the content referred to by the page heading, and that what came below that point was unrelated content (such as other articles or blog posts).
Perhaps if the titles were listed up front, followed by a CTA such as 'scroll down for more details', I would not have been confused by that - or maybe that's just me and a 'normal' reader would not have made that mistake.
Also, even though I'm a SpongeBob fan of sorts, the 4-panel comic strip at the top did not feel like it was on-point, rather it fell a bit flat for me. But then again I'm not your target audience...
Thanks for the feedback!!! That actually kind of tracks with some things we identified as possible issues.
We've updated the page with a clickable table of contents (and removed the meme + updated the title, but those aren't a functionality challenge lol) . Please check it out and let me know if that kind of addresses your concern or if there's something still confusing there.