Testing strap lines - Looking for feedback
Hey
We've recently redeveloped our landing page and we're after some feedback, specifically regarding the strap line at the top. We're deciding on either:
- The content promotion tool that helps you reach and engage significantly more of your target audience.
or
- The content promotion tool that reaches and engages significantly more of your target audience for you.
The latter emphasises that we're doing it for the customer, but not sure if it's needed, or if that is assumed when reading the first one? I prefer the way the first one reads, but that's personal preference and doesn't carry much weight.
Which resonates more with you?
Also, if you'd like to share some feedback on our new landing page in general, please do. You can see it here, and I'd love to hear what you think :)
