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Took your feedback and here it is

by James Dobry

I replied to a post about a week ago regarding submitting your landing page for feedback. Well, after posting my website the feedback came, and to sum it up, the website wasn't "clear" what the product was (b2c page) or how we benefit businesses (b2b page).

So, I spent part of my "free time" the past week to hash out a new design to make both the B2C and B2B landing pages more clear on what we do, what we provide, and our direction.

I know there is a lot I can add to these pages and will over time. I didn't want to spend too much of my time hashing out every detail possible when I can instead be focusing on sales and/or the actual product.

I would love to hear everyone's feedback on the landing pages, and of course the product idea in general. I thank you in advance!

https://www.justpicksomethingapp.com/

James Dobry's avatarJames Dobry
on January 11, 2021
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    Hi James,

    Positives:

    1. Good design of the landing page.
    2. Striking text in copy is very clever.

    Improvements:

    1. It's a mobile app for b2c users. Use the Android and iOS buttons on top to make it more clear.
    2. The movement of balls takes away too much attention. Consider making them small or slowing the speed. Maybe you can use them on sides and move the heading up so that the primary CTA and the picture are in full-view for large screens.
    3. The counting numbers takes too much time to count up to the required number. Consider starting from a bigger number.
    4. The visual in "What are you waiting for" section does not sync well. Using it in a mobile mockup like it is done in previous sections would make it pop more.
    5. The section right after the features section on both landing pages has a lot of text. I think it's better to just use the text in bold with icons. It would be much easier to skim.

    Hope this helps.

    thearslankhalid's avatar thearslankhalid
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      Thanks for the feedback! I hope to be able to have some time tonight to address it.

      James Dobry's avatar James Dobry
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      6 years ago
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    The counters are too much, too fast

    "It is time to discover new and exciting experiences made just for you"
    How about
    "Discover exciting experiences you'd love"

    I think 'Just Pick Something' is a bit of negative context, but it's better than something non emotional so :shrug:

    "With Just Pick Something, it is finally possible to discover unique drinks, flavorful food, and amazing entertainment that won't disappoint."
    to
    "Memorable unique drinks, flavorful food, and amazing entertainment."

    Also the other text, condence it a bit and make it more impactful with emotional terms.
    not "useful"

    The design is kinda nice, maybe less movement on the balls, as much as the phone moves is more than enough. Should probably test, I bet with no animations is would actually convert better, cause it's a distraction, even if it is nice to look at.

    CTA - Download & start discovering, can drop the download& or start discovering today

    hatkyinc's avatar hatkyinc
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      Thanks for the useful feedback. I am hoping I can get around to it tonight. Also thanks for the follow!

      James Dobry's avatar James Dobry
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      6 years ago
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