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What could help this page convert?

https://www.espri.io/i
submitted this linkon January 4, 2022
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    Here are a handful of things I spotted in no particular order of importance...

    • The "How it works" section doesn't really tell me that much about what the service specifically does. I don't think you need to give away all your secrets, but I'm not sure what it does that's going to be helpful.
    • The "We'll never (ever) sell your data." line, while being good to know, feels completely arbitrarily thrown in there. Perhaps as part of a subsection on privacy, etc.?
    • In one place, you ask for the channel, in another you ask for email. Which is it?
    • You talk about building a "unique fan journey", but you don't explain what that even means. Perhaps more detailed example(s)?
    • The top of the page looks like there's something missing on desktop. There's a lot of empty above-the-fold space that could be utilized better perhaps.

    I think you're on the right track, but I really had to read over things several times to get what I think you're trying to do...and I'm still not really sure.

    Best of luck with it!

    Bill

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      Will work on it, thanks!🙏