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What do think about my Themes Bundle page?

by Ahmad Ajmi

Greetings all,

I just updated my themes bundle page. Added a new FAQ section, improved the hero section copy into points and improved the overall page copy.

What do you think I should improve, do you think anything is missing?

URL: https://aspirethemes.com/bundle

Stay safe!

Thanks,

Ahmad Ajmi's avatarAhmad Ajmi
on April 8, 2020
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    Hey @ahmadajmi

    I really like your landing page design. Smart design using B&W and Blue. I learned a lot from your design.

    felix12777's avatar felix12777
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      Oh, thank you so much, Felix!

      Ahmad Ajmi's avatar Ahmad Ajmi
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    hi @ahmadajmi

    Cool landing page here is my feedback:

    • Ghost themes bundle, the font looks way too simple, can you jazz it up as its a micro brand in itself?
    • include the total value next to the first bullet 8 Premium Ghost themes worth $472
    • use icons for the grid section - https://i.imgur.com/0GPpiSF.png
    • who is Leslie Camacho, maybe add a job title or company name?
    • remove any links to other pages (if your aim is to sell the bundle remove any other potential link)
    • sprinkle more CTA's to sell the bundle throughout the page
    • Can you add a money back guarantee or something?

    Hope this helps,

    Please upvote if you liked my recommendations.

    thanks
    Waseem

    waseembashir's avatar waseembashir
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    6 years ago
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      Hey Waseem!

      Thank you so much for all of your great feedback, I appreciate it!

      I did some of your suggestions and checking the other points.

      • I already have a money-back guarantee written in the FAQ section. Do you think it's a good idea to add it as part of the bullet points?
      • The links on the page are for the included themes and for the websites that are currently using them. I think adding them is helpful to show the usage of the theme in the real world. Do you think I need to change something here or do you probably mean other links?

      Thanks again for all your help!

      Thanks,

      Ahmad Ajmi's avatar Ahmad Ajmi
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        no problem, happy to help.

        I would suggest to include the money-back guarantee higher up so that would show more confidence in the product.

        Yes, any links which divert visitors from the core offer could lead to a drop in conversions. If they click the link and end up on a different page, it would be hard for them to get back or remember why they were there in the first place. Alternatively, you can showcase the items in a popup, that way they stay on the page.

        Have a look at our most recent landing page, maybe it will spark some ideas:
        https://lp.apexure.com/webinar/

        Hope that helps.

        Waseem

        waseembashir's avatar waseembashir
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          Waseem, this helps a lot!

          I added the money-back guarantee to the top along with other changes. I like the popup idea, this is great! I also find your landing page to be so inspiring, very well done!

          Thanks again, stay safe!

          Ahmad

          Ahmad Ajmi's avatar Ahmad Ajmi
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            thanks so much and best of luck!

            waseembashir's avatar waseembashir
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