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What do you think about my landing page?

I'm developing a marketing automation tool based on WhatsApp. I've recently hosted our website, however, expecting some review about the design and content.

https://centralcrm.org

on February 15, 2022
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    Congrats on the launch! Overall looks good.

    Here are a few points anyway 🧐

    • Your H1 is a bit vague for me, and the subtitle doesn't help much either. Nothing on your banner, except your logo, is telling me that this is a CRM tool. I think the next section title would make a better HQ:

    Meet your intuitive CRM for WhatsApp

    • Not in love with the colors. The blue and red look like CSS' named colors. Well ok, not that bad but maybe you could try playing around and see if you can come up with a better combination?

    • I am not sure about different C2A buttons you have. First it says request early access, then request demo. A bit confusing about what I am getting into.

    Again, good job overall πŸ‘ Just giving you some feedback since that's what you asked 😊

    Here's my landing page for you to roast, if you're up for it: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/roast-my-landing-page-i-will-roast-yours-6b35f5f999

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      Thank you so much for the review @mzrnsh
      It's very helpful and sure will roast your landing page too πŸ˜‰

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    Very good page - immediately got what you're selling. This is dope, I would add testimonials, a better footer and then I would make sure the call to actions are not conflicting one with another!

    If you enjoyed this breakdown you might enjoy me roasting more websites on my youtube channel -> https://lf.gg/youtube

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      thank you very much for the review @orliesaurus
      and yeah will definitely roast yours πŸ˜‰