What is the #1 thing to improve on my landing page?
I am launching a new product (based on our core tech also used in one other product) and would very much like to have your feedback on the things we can improve on the landing page I built.
Message? Target segment? Interesting features?
https://coment.in/en/newsletter/
I am not giving too much information here as I don't want to impact the way you perceive the product but I am happy to answer in the comment section (or via DM).
Thank you,
Antoine
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Thank you for the feedback @hatkyinc. I will see what I can do about it.
The page loads quite slowly, which makes it feel... amateurish. The 2MB image is way too big, and optimizing it's size and compression would help tremendously.
https://i.imgur.com/oHAKA1E.png
Good point @CodeOfTheProgrammer! I changed the size and the compression by more than 2x, maybe I can do even more.
I agree with the comment about the battery icons. I get the sentiment behind the power ups, but I think those actions can have distinct icons that reduce the amount the user has to read :)
Maybe: Link, Share, Comment, and Rocket/Battery/Power-up icons would be a good fit
thanks @jwbaldwin, you're totally right, I made a few changes going your way, I think it is easier to read and understand the process.
"What users say about it" section looks fake. Especially with very popular stock photos. It would be nicer to remove it at all.
thank you @faridmovsumov. Do you think we should remove the whole section or only the stock photos?
Not sure really.
I second the feedback on the name. You really should change it.
Also, the empty battery icon for the three steps doesn't really match with what those actions are. I would use different icons that are similar to what is happening in each step.
Thanks @growth_hacker77.
The battery icon is used to show the progress, some kind of 'power-up', but that can be changed.
Hamburger menu does not work on mobile
thank you @shawnjavadi, I removed it as there is no menu to display.
This phrase is wrong "Marketing managers, that's the easiest way to review campaign drafts with your team"
'That'? What is that?
It should be something like "The easiest way for marketing managers to review campaign drafts with their team"
Or something like that.
I and I thought it was like a polling tool to get feedback from your audience when I read the headline.
thank you @joshdance.
You're right, the phrase is not really clear. I think I'll go with what you said.
Concerning your 2nd point, you're also right, so I switched the 2 phrases to avoid the confusion.
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thank you @iamanas22. A few comments on your feedback:
Thank you!
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I changed your 2 last points, I am not sure I can change the sticky header but I'll see what I can do. Thank you for your kind words!
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thank you @Primer. The change of name is not planned right now but who knows :)
The testimonial images come from stock photo as I am waiting for the real photos.