What problem are you solving?
Without telling me the features of your start-up, what problem are you solving?
Recommended format:
We are helping X users get Y and Z
Our website is: ...
Without telling me the features of your start-up, what problem are you solving?
Recommended format:
We are helping X users get Y and Z
Our website is: ...
We are helping creators get money by selling their products
our website is https://flurly.com :)
This looks good to me. What is your revenue? How many customers? Are you recruiting co-founders that can add value?