Which description do you think is better for our app?
1:
Your personal social map app
for discovering and sharing places and experiences
2:
Personal recommendations from people you trust
starting with their favourite places
3:
Your personal recommendation engine.
Share and discover the best places around you.
Any critique or other suggestions welcome.
#2
Only the second line needed.
That's a really interesting perspective. Simplicity! It definitely made me pause to think for a second. I will A/B test this for sure. For now we landed on:
Thanks for your input
You should link to your app.
#2 though as well. The value prop here is that you can find out what your friends like, not just places random people liked (like the competitors in the space). So I'd lean into that.
Thanks for your feedback . I was struggling to show the value prop and also centre the message around the user. People are inherently self-centred so it's important to put them in the middle of the message. In the end we have landed on a hybrid of 1 & 2:
Links:
iOS https://apps.apple.com/au/app/bibimapp/id1416721925
Android https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.bibimapp